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Old 11-01-2007, 12:23 PM   #1 (permalink)
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Official Poetry Thread

Have you written any Poetry you are particularly proud of ?. Perhaps there are poems written by someone else that you would like to share ?. Post em in here, but be careful to give credit where it's due folks, just incase, you know how it is.

I'll get the ball rolling with a Poem I wrote to one of my own peices of music entitled "War Cry Animato" (which you can hear by visiting the link in my signature and clicking on the track which will stream it... for free lol). Anyway, here it is. Now let's have yours.

I see it as I watch the skies,
And on the faces of children,
Deep in their eyes.
As all at once it has become so clear,
the true failure of your love.

We're told that you will guide us there,
Yet looking around all I see is despair.
A Now long lost hope,
And a distant dream,
Thats the glory of your love.

Perhaps the path's still long and tough,
But why must this road be so damn rough.
For we mostly share,
one common goal,
The glory of our love.

Asking questions now of everything,
Unanswered and left lingering,
In the memories of,
those of us still here.
Where is the glory of your love ?.

I hear it as the birds fly by and,
I hear it when a baby cries.
It's the sound of your power,
from up above,
the so-called glory of your love.

I feel it in the autumn breeze,
pain of truth brings me to my knees.
As all at once it has become so clear,
the true failure of your love.

I sense it when i hear your name,
could all of this hope really be in vein.
Is every tear that's shed just a joke to you?,
is this the glory of your love ?.

Perhaps theres hope for the chosen few,
a path that we all must try to get through.
A dream for most,
reality for some.
Is that the glory of your love ?
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